Don't go there!!! it'll bite you!

Shh youll scare it away!! On Tuesday the 28th of July our class and the rest of the senior school went to the Auckland Zoo!!! One of the most popular favourites in Room 3 was the Red Panda. The Red Panda



Miss Lister's feedback:

• Great hook at the start to get the attention of the audience
• Fantastic to see your capital letters are all in the correct place

• Remember to have speech marks and punctuation when someone is speaking
• Check your title, there is a capital letter missing

"Shh you'll scare it away!!" On Tuesday the 28th of July our class and the rest of the senior school went to the Auckland Zoo!!! One of the most popular favourites in Room 3 was the Red Panda. The Red Panda was also my favorite because it was really cute,adorable,fluffy and had a innocent face. The Red Panda was a really good tree climber because  it had really strong upper body strength. It was a really good jumper because it had hind legs so it could nearly jump over the wall.The Red Panda was really funny because sometimes we saw it hanging upside down its tongue out.