"There it is!'' shouted Aqua as she spotted the red panda '' they are usually hiding." the red panda was high up in the tree. "I can't see it, I can't see it!!" said Anthony. "Over there," Robyn told Anthony "oh." ...2 min later... "look another red panda habitat and it's next to the otters." said Anthony finally spotting something first. Miss Lister's feedback:
- Interesting vocabulary, Robyn: shouted, spotted
- Great subject-specific vocabulary: habitat
- Remember a new line for a new speaker so your post is easier to read (so it flows)
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